Review – Pencillin
Penicillin? Yes, of the Jewish variety.
Background
I wanted a bit of a dovetail story, where characters would behave in a manner that would prefigure the future. Furthermore, I wanted to give Jay Hayes a bit more personality. I actually had a bit of a cold and so I seized upon that idea, and wrote about what he’d be like if he had a small cold.
For Jay, who feels he needs to be in top condition all the time, a cold is a cause for secrecy. But he’s found out. A cough, and the problem is betrayed to the only other person in the hall. Fortunately for Jay, that person is Lili O’Day.
Lili promises a little Jewish penicillin to cure what ails Jay. But she extracts a promise out of him – in exchange for making chicken soup and keeping quiet about things, Jay must do one thing for her. He’s got to smile more.
The story is recalled by them at the end of the E2 stories, and, in Everybody Knows This is Nowhere, Lili remembers the event after Jay’s death.
Story Postings
- Penicillin on Fanfiction.net
- Penicillin on Fictionpad
- also, Penicillin on Wattpad
- Penicillin on G & T Show forums
- Penicillin in context
Rating
The story has a K rating.
Upshot
It’s a compact little tale, but I think it packs a bit of a punch.
Lili’s Chicken Soup with Matzoh Balls Recipe
Unless she’s baking, Lili doesn’t use regular measurements, so these are more like judgment calls.
Chicken Soup
In a slow cooker, add the following –
- 2 cups low sodium chicken broth (if substituting water, make sure to add a dash of kosher salt)
- 2 pounds of chicken meat, boneless. Breast meat has less fat; thigh meat has more flavor. Roughly cut the meat; it doesn’t have to be perfect cubes.
- A half a pound of carrots, peeled and roughly chopped
- And a half a pound of celery, roughly chopped
- A half a pound of onions, roughly chopped (Vidalias are best; white onions are fine)
- If the slow cooker isn’t full to about an inch from the top, add plain water until it is. If you don’t have room, reduce the proportions of meat and vegetables
Cook on low slow cooker setting for a minimum of four hours.
Matzoh Balls
Combine the following in a bowl –
- 1 Tablespoon of olive oil
- also 1 cup of salt-free matzoh meal
- 2 eggs or one cup of room temperature egg beaters or the equivalent
- 1 Tablespoon of water
So if the mixture is too crumbly and dry, add more oil and water, in more or less even proportions. If it seems too loose, add a little more matzoh meal. Then mix together well. Cover and place into a refrigerator for 15 minutes.
While the mixture is cooling, heat up a small pot of salty water. Bring it to a boil and then allow to simmer. When the mixture’s time in the refrigerator is up, wet your hands and grab a handful of the mixture. A ping pong ball size is good. Shape into a ball and drop into the salted water. Bring the water back up to a boil and cook for 15 minutes, without covering.
Combining the Ingredients
Once the slow cooker is done, combine a serving (2 of the ping pong ball-sized matzoh balls and a cup of the soup) and heat them together in a microwave for 2 minutes on high. Make sure to store the matzoh balls and the soup separately, as otherwise the matzoh balls will absorb all of the liquid.
Garnish with parsley, or even curry, if you like. Serve with bread!
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