Review – Concord
Concord is a favorite.
Origins
Concord
The prompt was about “a page from the past”. I had long thought about dropping a Star Trek: Enterprise character into the extreme past, and had even done this with a pair of TNG characters, in Crackerjack.
But I wanted to go back even further, so I hit upon the start of the American Revolution and a local pair of battles – Lexington and Concord.
And what better person to toss into that pressure cooker than someone who would be in trouble the minute he opened his mouth?
Enter Malcolm Reed.
Plot Points
The Premise
Reed is unceremoniously dumped right into the middle of the Battle of Lexington, and that’s only the start of his troubles.
An Injury
Because he’s wholly unprepared for this form of warfare, he becomes injured, but not horribly so. However, in 1775, infected injuries could easily result in a loss of limb or life. I deliberately made it so that the surgeon in the regiment had already died, and the village doctor had joined the militia. These absences meant that Malcolm would have to be treated in some other fashion.
At the same time, the man next to him, Robert Lennox, is a lot worse off, and may die.
A Place to Go
The quartering of troops is very real to history, and so I had Malcolm’s commanding officer push for a farmhouse to accept the two injured men. Malcolm is apologetic at the same time that his commander – the true to history Lieutenant Colonel Francis Smith – is rude and blustery. The mistress of the farmhouse accepts the two wounded men as she has very little choice in the matter. She is a colonial and is sympathetic to the revolutionary cause. Her husband has even gone to fight for it. But she is alone and is not about to let Malcolm or Robert die on her doorstep.
Some Soon to be Familiar Names
The mistress of the house introduces herself as Charlotte Hayes, wife to Jacob Hayes. She and her servant, Benjamin Warren, keep the home and assist the two wounded men.
Because the Concord story begins right before Voracious, the names O’Day and Hayes are not yet familiar to the characters. Furthermore, the name Warren also figures in my stories. In Crackerjack, Wesley’s wife’s maiden name is Warren. And in the E2 stories, there is a Science crewman with the name of Nyota Warren, who ends up with canon character Billy Dane. Benjamin is an ancestor of them just like Charlotte and Jacob are ancestors to Lili and Jay (thereby making Jay and Lili distant cousins).
How Did He Get There? And How Does He Get Back?
Without giving away too many spoilers, suffice it to say that Malcolm’s presence in 1775 is due to a defective temporal experiment. His return can only happen if the experimenters figuring out the problem, and solve it.
Story Postings
- Concord – original posting
- Concord on Fanfiction.net
- also, Concord on Fictionpad
- Concord on Wattpad
- in addition, Concord on the G & T Show forums
- Concord in context
Rating
The story is rated K.
Upshot
I love how the historical aspects worked out. I did a great deal of research in order to understand how the farm would run, what things would cost and any number of other details. The story was extremely satisfying to put together. And it is easily one of my absolute favorites.
