Review – Party on Risa
Party on Risa is just fluff.
Background
At a much smaller Star Trek site that I really don’t go to anymore, they celebrated once I’d hit a certain number of posts. As a thank you for that, I posted this little party story. It’s only meant to be a bit of fluff. However, I was able to add a bit to my lore. For a long time, this was the first story in my saga.
Plot
In Between Days
Hence as a fill in for the canon episode Two Days and Two Nights, I wrote this story in order to give a little depth to Travis. After all, in the episode, about all that happens is that he suffers an injury while rock climbing on Risa. But he didn’t start off rock climbing. At least, I didn’t want him to.
Hence, the little bit of fan fiction.
One thing I was able to do with this small story was to bring in Witannen a lot faster and earlier than before. With no statement of the name of the species (and Travis leaves quickly, plus in Star Trek: Enterprise canon he’s knocked out not too long after that), there’s no real first contact. However, for sharp-eyed readers, the stage is set for this species. Hence when the Witannen show up in Together, he really should have remembered them. But with him losing consciousness in canon, it fits that he would either not remember or maybe even suffer just a tiny bit of amnesia.
Story Postings
- Party on Risa on Fanfiction.net
- Party on Risa on Fictionpad
- In addition, Party on Risa on Wattpad
- Party on Risa on G & T Show Forums
- Party on Risa in context
Rating
The story is Rated K.
Upshot
The story has little purpose, other than to be a little fluff. It succeeds in that area, to be sure.
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