Review – Apple
For my own prompt about temptation, I decided to fill in a missing scene from Reversal. The idea was also to dovetail with a scene in Fortune, where Shelby and Travis spend time together, and it appears that they might be starting a relationship soon.
But I did not want things to run smoothly.
Harvest produce is set out, and Lili sets about explaining what’s available for dessert, which is a fruit and cheese plate. Malcolm looks up as she’s speaking.
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The Story is Rated K.
For a small fill-in scene, I think the story works just fine. I would not add it permanently to Reversal, though, as I feel it would interrupt a lot of the flow. But it was fun to add a different slant to a day in that story that doesn’t get a lot of detail.