Review – Fear
Fear is one of the most important motivators for any person. Furthermore, in this very short story, it is used to get two rather disparate people to connect.
During the E2 timeline and more specifically during the events of The Three of Us, Lili is required to take a shuttle flight test. While the pretense for this is a need for the characters to cross-train, my true motivation was to get Lili alone for a moment and then get her and Jay alone in order to have the Imvari capture them.
As a result, this little scene is necessary. Travis tests Lili on how to fly a shuttle. And she fails. Hence the scene accomplishes its task. But I wanted more, so I made it about Lili’s fears. Furthermore, I was able to make it about Travis and him missing his family.
The story is Rated K.
I liked this little scene so much, it became a part of the far bigger book. Love may make the world go ’round, but we all share fear.
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