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Review – Eight

Review – Eight

Background

Review – Eight. Aw.

Eight is a mixed bag of stories to fill in a few small gaps and inconsistencies or untold stories. Truth is, I was most likely the only person who noticed or cared about these little untold moments or inconsistent bits. No problem. It is always important to keep writing, so I was able to do so with this small set of exercises. Furthermore, it may serve as an introduction to my work for some people.

Review – Eight
Review – Eight

As a gift for the Chanukah holiday (to myself), I decided to write eight little family-centric stories taking place within my various universes. The various characters would interact, or not, but the main idea was for each story to be related to family somehow.

Plot

Even in the future, and regardless of species, it is all about family. Home and hearth, even in space.

Stories cover In Between Days, the E2 timeline, the Daranaean Emergence series, the Eriecho series, Times of the HG Wells, Hold Your Dominion, and there is also a second HG Wells story which focuses on Levi Cavendish and Otra D’Angelo.

Story Postings

Rating

The story is Rated K.

Upshot

Unfortunately, I am not so sure if anyone can relate to this series of stories as well as I can. Maybe they’re more like inside jokes? I don’t know.

Eight stories. And eight worlds. Eight timelines. Or eight universes.

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Review – Coffee

Review – Coffee

Background

Review – Coffee
Review – Coffee

For an inspiration of the same name, I wrote a quickie drabble. The truth is, the story could be about anyone.

It does not have to relate to Star Trek at all – and it just about barely does.

Plot

Anyone who knows Star Trek: Voyager is abundantly aware that Captain Kathryn Janeway enjoys her morning brew. One thing I liked about the show was that, despite replicator technology (and its seemingly magical properties), she’s still got to have real coffee. She notices if she’s getting something ersatz, a pale imitation.

Story Postings

Rating

The story is Rated K.

Upshot

I wanted to capture that moment, right before everything goes to hell and you’re being called on for a million different things. Did I make it? You tell me.

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Review – Overture

Review – Overture

Background

Review – Overture
Review – Overture

Overture came about from a Star Trek fanfiction prompt about new beginnings.

I could not get the idea out of my head about the start of a classical concert. That led me to Lakeisha Warren.

Young love is often a good idea for a story, and this was no exception.

Plot

I sent Wesley Crusher out to visit Lakeisha, not too long after they had first met. As a direct sequel to Imprecision, and a prequel to The All-Stars, Wesley would be very interested in this amusing musically gifted girl.

A classical concert, for her, could easily encompass music from The Who’s Tommy rock opera.

As Lakeisha practices, Wesley listens in a little, and then he knocks on her door. He tells her that he does not believe in holding back. He wants her to know she already means something to him.

Music

The story’s music is The Who’s Overture.

Story Postings

Rating

The story is Rated K.

Upshot

Just like a regular overture, the story hints at great things to come. I hope it whets readers’ appetites for more Wes and Lakeisha.
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Progress Report – December 2016

Progress Report – December 2016

December 2016 was another month where I posted only older stories. Because I was busy with finishing up this year’s NaNoWriMo project, I could not work on new Star Trek fan fiction.

Posted Works

December 2016
First of all, on the G & T Show forums, I posted nothing! Because Russian spammers continued attacking, we decided to take the forums down. However, the good news is that I will be reposting as blog posts. However, this meant the read counts ground to a  screeching halt and I won’t have a good way to check them. By making this change, Temper was left unfinished on that site. And as of the writing of this blog post, the replacement does not yet exist. Hence postings will become even more curtailed.

And on Fanfiction.net, I posted the end of Where the Wind Comes Sweepin’ Down the Plain. So then I was able to start to post The Point is Probably Moot.

Finally, on Wattpad, I posted the last of A Long, Long Time Ago and then segued into posting Ohio.

Milestones

See the Stats page for individual read and review counts.

WIP Corner

This month was all about finishing the November 2016 NaNoWriMo book, The Real Hub of the Universe.

Prep Work

I spent some time getting prompts together for the @WattNaNo profile on Wattpad. The idea is to make next year easier. Hence as I think of prompts, I just add them. And I have been asking other people to help me with making the prompts. However, the real issue is getting someone to post the daily prompts during November, when I am slammed.

This Month’s Productivity Killers

Between finishing the NaNoWriMo book, podcasting, blogging for two podcasts, the wedding blog, the nursing blog, and my own health management, there was simply no time for fan fiction! Oh, and I also looked for work. In addition, I was saddened to learn my one-time collaborator, Justin Miller, passed on.

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Review – Truth

Review – Truth

Background

Once again, the prompt is the same as the name of the story.

Plot

Review – Truth
Review – Truth

A year after Bron and Sophra start going out, he meets her parents and blurts out the truth.

Poor Bron! Always so sensitive and sweet. Sophra’s parents are skeptical, and her father in particular is unsure of things. Bron doesn’t even tell or ask Sophra first. Instead, as her father asks for his intentions, Bron blurts out that his intention is marriage.

Initially appalled, Sophra’s parents come around when Bron tells them he will have a good engineering job and they will likely adopt children as the chance of having their own probably isn’t there. A little grudgingly, perhaps, he is accepted.

Story Postings

Rating

This story is rated K.

Upshot

As is always the case with Bron, a little bit of haplessness creeps in. But he’s kind, smart, and committed, and I think you just can’t help but to root for him.

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Review – Transported

Review – Transported

Background

For a prompt of the same name, I wanted to cover a rather different type of transporting, being the kind which happens when you are overly engrossed in something.

Plot

Review – Transported
Review – Transported

Skrol and Tr’Dorna misbehave during a class field trip.

It is late and the class at Picard High School is heading back from a field trip to … somewhere. It doesn’t matter where.

All that matters is that it’s crowded and hot and dark, and Tr’Dorna is wearing a skirt, as she and Skrol have sex in the transport, not ten feet away from their teacher.

Story Postings

Rating

This story is rated M.

Upshot

I liked the idea of a couple getting it on in such a public and dangerous manner. The only other couple I have had, so far, to do such a thing, are Jay Hayes and Susan Cheshire. But they are never seen in the act; the reference is just one of Jay’s memories of her.

Here, the act and its leadup are covered pretty nicely, I feel.

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Review – Losin’ It

Review – Losin’ It

Background

The prompt for a monthly challenge was, if I recall correctly, about lying. And who better to lie than the semi-silver-tongued reptilian devil himself, Skrol?

Plot

Review – Losin’ It
Review – Losin’ It

Oh, what has Skrol done now?

Like teenagers from time immemorial, Tr’Dorna, Skrol, Etrina, Bron, and Sophra are all a little obsessed with each others’ lives. This includes the inevitable question of, are you still a virgin? Because by that time, not everyone is.

Skrol hatches a plan to get Tr’Dorna to flip her tail for him (essentially, for them to have sex or at least get close to that) by lying to her and saying that not only is he a virgin, but that she is the first female he has ever kissed.

Bron calls him out on it and threatens to tell Tr’Dorna, and Skrol is forced to confess.

Story Postings

Rating

This story is rated T.

Upshot

The story is okay; it’s not great and I would not put it up there with my best work. It’s just a little teenaged humor story more than anything else.

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Review – Insecurity

Review – Insecurity

Background

In response to a prompt of the same name, I decided to revisit one of my favorite non-human interspecies couples.

Plot

Review – Insecurity
Review – Insecurity

A few weeks after Bron and Sophra start going out, they are separated.

Bron, as always, is the somewhat nerdy and very shy and perhaps overly sensitive. It’s a somewhat banal thing, for a teenaged couple to be separated for some reason or another, and for one of them to be freaking out.

Of all the people to come to Bron’s rescue, it’s Tr’Dorna who tells him to hang in there, and that it’s all going to be okay. Bron even gets in an aside to Skrol, telling him that Tr’Dorna is a good person and he should better appreciate her.

Story Postings

Rating

This story is rated K.

Upshot

I love my poor little sensitive New Aged-Gorn. Long live Bron!

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Review – A Gathering

Review – A Gathering

Background

So many holiday Star Trek fanfiction stories are about Christmas. I wanted one to be about Thanksgiving. And who would be more grateful than Eriecho and Saddik, the ex-convicts from Canamar Prison?

Plot

Review – A Gathering
Review – A Gathering

At the Martian sanctuary, Jack Shaw hosts a massive Thanksgiving dinner but, more importantly, gets to spend some time with Juliet Parker.

I was pleased to be able to follow their romance a little, particularly as I had only briefly mentioned her in Release.  In A Gathering, I show how Jack is utterly jumping the gun in their relationship, which isn’t really a relationship at all. She barely remembers him, whereas he had actually been considering putting money down on a house. But she is a generous soul, and sees that he might not be a terribly romantic guy, but she could not possibly ask for a more loyal and invested partner.

Story Postings

Rating

This story is rated K.

Upshot

I will have to get back to Jack and Julie at some point. I have not yet decided whether they work in the prime timeline.

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Review – Loss

Review – Loss

Background

Yet again, the prompt and the story have the same name.

Plot

Review – Loss
Review – Loss

Geordi and his friends help Data deal with a significant loss.

This story is for anyone who has ever had to bury a beloved pet. I have, several times.

I originally wrote it as more or less on a lark. I am more of a dog person than a cat person and so the death of the orange tabby affected me about as much as it did Data in the beginning of the story.

But later, after having written The Continuing Adventures of Porthos, I decided I kind of like Spot after all, and hope this little story gives her her due.

Story Postings

Rating

This story is rated K.

Upshot

The story is pretty well received wherever it goes, although that may  be at least partly due to the inclusion of Data, who a lot of people feel is a beloved character.

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