Review – A Hazy Shade
For a prompt about seasons, everyone seemed to focus on summer (as did I; I also wrote And the Livin’ is Easy from the same prompt).
But I also wanted to follow Jonathan Archer at the twilight of his life. Married to Miva, Archer is lamenting the departed of the NX-01, both in a formal ceremony to christen a dedication obelisk, and afterwards.
The occasion is fifty years since the last flight of the NX-01. An obelisk is unveiled on Earth (I never specified the city) and on it are inscribed the names of the dead from that ship, no matter how or where or when they died. Malcolm and Lili are already named on it. Although she isn’t named in the story, Melissa would also be on it. Miva points out that Karin and Ethan are still alive, as are Azar Hamidi and his wife, who may or may not be Maryam Haroun in the prime timeline (I have not decided on this yet).
- A Hazy Shade on the Ad Astra forums
- A Hazy Shade on Fanfiction.net
- A Hazy Shade on Fictionpad
- A Hazy Shade on Wattpad
- A Hazy Shade in context
The story is rated K.
This is a quiet, slow, measured story, where not a lot happens. But I think that makes sense, that two elderly people at what is very much like a funeral would move a slow, measured, deliberate pace as they paused and reflected.
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